1.0.2 Kidnapped storekeeper

[askew1]

Just a typo in the quest log entry.



"One of the Order ships will flank them and help me same the store keeper."

[ai_enabled]

Hello! Thanks for reporting! Fixed now.
If you find any more mistypes, please report in this topic.
Regards!

[askew1]

Another small text fix.



"How much science points do I have currently?" --> "How many science points do I have currently?"

[Lurler]

"How much science points do I have currently?" --> "How many science points do I have currently?"

Thank you! Will be in the next version.

[ai_enabled]

Not in the today release... it's already built, uploading it now.

[askew1]

I started a new game and paid more attention to the tutorials and have suggestions for them. I hope you don't mind. 


Space Station http://i.imgur.com/mL8QKch.png

"After that, visit the decks section and seek for this guy. He will be happy to explain you more, and make sure to listen to him carefully, he could teach you a lot of useful things."
"After that, visit the decks section and look for this guy. He will be happy to explain more to you. Make sure to listen to him carefully. He could teach you many useful things."

Moving your ship http://i.imgur.com/Mk7fIxL.png

"If you haven't changed control scheme the default keys for movement are"
"If you haven't changed the control scheme, the default keys for movement are"
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"is the cruise mode, it allows your ship to move very fast when you are traveling long distances, it is activated by"
"is the cruise mode. It allows your ship to move very fast when you are traveling long distances. It is activated by"

Hangar http://i.imgur.com/l7tUjq2.png

"Primary parts - these are your ship primary systems such as"
"Primary parts - your ship's primary systems such as"
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"Devices - different equipment to perform certain tasks, such as mining asteroids or other."
"Devices - different equipment to perform certain tasks, such as mining asteroids."
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"Additionally, some equipment may require certain skills to use, but most doesn't."
"Additionally, some equipment may require certain skills to use, but most do not."

Decks http://i.imgur.com/UZDzZYj.png

"You should also pay attention to their faction, it is displayed as a small icon right on their portrait."
"You should also pay attention to their faction. It is displayed as a small icon on their portrait."
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"their own agendas, so, stay sharp!"
"their own agendas. So stay sharp!"

Station store http://i.imgur.com/lKTGDdj.png

"For example military station could offer you the best selection of military gear,"
"For example, military stations offer you the best selection of military gear,"
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"level of the star system, the higher it is the better stuff will be available for sale."
"level of the star system. Higher tech levels will stock better equipment."

Character http://i.imgur.com/Kqpk3wI.png http://i.imgur.com/254ctjA.png

"On the left you can see your current character level, experience points as well as all effects your character currently has. These effects could be anything from increased maneuvering to ability to pilot heavy cruisers."
"On the left, you can see your current character level, experience points, and all effects your character has. These effects could be anything from increased maneuvering to the ability to pilot heavy cruisers."
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"However the most important is probably the piloting tree since to get access to bigger ships you need to have piloting proficiency with a particular hull"
"However the most important category is probably the piloting tree. Access to bigger ships requires piloting proficiency with a particular hull"

Galaxy map http://i.imgur.com/JIoXn1y.png

"You should also pay attention to tech level (cog icon) and danger level (swords icon), the higher they are the higher the items and enemies respectively will be."
"You should also pay attention to the tech level (cog icon) and danger level (swords icon). The higher they are, the higher the items and enemies will be respectively."
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"systems, it is the faction territories. There are number of factions in the world of VoidExpanse"
"systems. These indicate the faction territories. There are a number of factions in the world of VoidExpanse"

Factions http://i.imgur.com/TsP6lHT.png

"might require more efforts on your part if you"
"might require more effort on your part if you"

There is a pop-up at the beginning also with this (http://i.imgur.com/04eEkdG.png):

"Now I should head to the nearest space station and seek for One-Eyed Joe - I've heard he's helping beginners to figure out how things work. He should be inside the station, on one of the decks."
"Now I should head to the nearest space station and look for One-Eyed Joe. I've heard he's helping beginners figure out how things work. He should be inside the station on one of the decks."

[Lurler]

askew1, oh, thank you.
Really appreciate the help! We are not native speakers (naturally), so even with the help of other people there are still some mistakes left in these texts.

[askew1]

I understand you're not native English speakers and happy to help with the text.

SPOILER ALERT Ending spoilers follow for people who haven't finished the game!

Here's another set having to do with the ending for The Order. (link (http://i.imgur.com/eAvtG7q.png)) I've noticed irregular references to the "Far Colonies" and sometimes they are called "Far colonies". My corrections to these references I feel are what you intended.

"As remaining Xengatarn ships are destroyed by the Order forces all around Far colonies you contemplate what has transpired in this short time of your involvement."
"As the remaining Xengatarn ships are destroyed by the Order forces all around the Far Colonies, you contemplate what has transpired in this short time of your involvement."

"This war, that has torn Far colonies away from the Federation space has finally came to an end thanks to actions of one brave hero."
"This war, that has torn the Far Colonies away from Federation space, has finally come to an end thanks to the actions of one brave hero."

"It is, indeed, a grand day for humanity and for peace of the galaxy."
"It is, indeed, a grand day for humanity and peace across the galaxy."

"It will still be a few years until the words of your success reach the Federation Space and a new jumpgate connection is established reuniting the people. But it is nothing, compared to a new hope for millions of people living in this region of space."
"It will still be a few years until the words of your success reach Federation Space and a new jumpgate connection is established reuniting the people. But it is nothing compared to a new hope for millions of people living in this region of space."

"Xengatarns are defeated, destroyed and wiped out from the face of the galaxy!"
"The Xengatarn have been defeated, destroyed, and wiped out of the galaxy!"

"Who knows why they went aggressive and attacked our colonies starting this long and bloody war, but it is hardly an important question now."
"Who knows why they became aggressive and attacked our colonies starting this long and bloody war, but it is hardly an important question now."

"Humanity once again reigns in it's nonpareil glory and Xengatarn incident will be but a footnote to a grand history of humankind!"
"Humanity once again reigns in its nonpareil glory and the Xengatarn incident will be but a footnote in the grand history of humankind!"

[askew1]

I've been speaking with Selek Jeredan and have some edits for his dialogue and the Freedom faction quest.

1. http://i.imgur.com/8wOj5Jn.png

"When humanity reached Far Colonies and started their expansion here, I've put huge amounts of money and my efforts into that, to find out if there are any Irgrek artifacts to be discovered in this area."
"When humanity reached the Far Colonies, I invested huge amounts of money and effort into the expansion in order to find out if there were any Irgrek artifacts to be discovered in this area."

2. http://i.imgur.com/4ErP39R.png

"Destroy jumpgate? Why?"
"Destroy the jumpgate? Why?"

3. http://i.imgur.com/0qooHZC.png

"My name is Selek Jordan. I'm..., let's just say I am a top manager of Freedom faction. I make sure everybody gets what they deserve."
"My name is Selek Jordan. I'm...let's just say I'm the head manager of the Freedom faction. I make sure everybody gets what they deserve."

4. http://i.imgur.com/cBhSxi4.png

"Well, you should hurry up. I've received news that Xengatarn are gathering their fleet, they might soon attack, and if they do, we won't need this jumpgate anymore..."
"Well, you should hurry up. I've received news that the Xengatarn are gathering their fleet and might soon attack. If they do, we won't need this jumpgate anymore..."

5. http://i.imgur.com/7EVOdcr.png

"Here, take some money and grab a drink, you deserve some rest for sure."
"Here, take some money and grab a drink. You deserve some rest for sure."

6. http://i.imgur.com/haWg0zU.png

"You're back, and that means, that our mission is entering its final stage."
"Welcome back. Our mission is entering its final stage."

7. http://i.imgur.com/jbbWkKv.png

"If the Xengatarn find out about this jumpgate, they will destroy it, and that will take away all of our chances of ever getting away from the Far Colonies."
"If the Xengatarn find out about this jumpgate, they will destroy it and any chance of ever getting away from the Far Colonies."

8. http://i.imgur.com/zBnflDl.png

"It's on the outskirts of Costan Theta system. It's enormous, you won't miss it."
"It's on the outskirts of the Costan Theta system. It's enormous. You won't miss it."


Also an edit for the Help Boris quest.

1. http://i.imgur.com/A4TkDC6.png

"Then they told me that I must pay him ten percent of the factory income, or they would kill me."
"Then they told me that I must pay them ten percent of the factory's income, or they would kill me."

[askew1]

Here are some edits for One-Eyed Joe and the tutorial quests at the beginning.



Package for a Banshee (quest log) - http://i.imgur.com/7BBIjMU.png

"Scurvy is dead, I should search for a package in his wreck."
"Scurvy is dead. I should search for a package in his wreck."

"I've got the package, now I need to take it back to One-Eyed Joe."
"I've got the package. Now I need to take it back to One-Eyed Joe."

"I successfully completed Joe's task, and he gave me a new ship hull, just as he promised."
"I successfully completed Joe's task. He gave me a new ship hull as promised."



One-Eyed Joe - http://i.imgur.com/2YNfwc9.png

"Well, with Xengatarn around you've definitely gonna get yourself an adventure. Galaxy is a dangerous place, you know."
"Well, with the Xengatarn around you're definitely gonna get yourself an adventure. The Galaxy is a dangerous place, you know."

"We're in a middle of a war."
"We're in the middle of a war."

http://i.imgur.com/eaCAG9b.png

"Thanks for the ore, I'll put it to good use."
"Thanks for the ore. I'll put it to good use."

"Here are your consumables, as I've promised!"
"Here are your consumables, as I promised!"

http://i.imgur.com/GNmxG34.png

"You see, here, in Far Colonies, there are a lot of really valuable minerals. That's the reason why the Federation tried to expand in this direction in the first place. Minerals from here can be used for almost anything: weapons crafting, stations construction, medicinal devices."
"You see, here in the Far Colonies, there are a lot of really valuable minerals. That's the reason why the Federation tried to expand in this direction in the first place. Minerals from here can be used for almost anything: weapons crafting, station construction, medicinal devices, etc."

http://i.imgur.com/r515D4G.png

"Yeah, it's a special container that you put into your ship's consumable slots, these allow you to quickly restore shields, repair your hull, replenish fuel, energy, and even restock ammunition."
"Yeah, it's a special container that you put into your ship's consumable slots. These allow you to quickly restore shields, repair your hull, replenish fuel and energy, and even restock ammunition."

"These containers are rather expensive, but I can give you a couple of them for free in exchange for a little service."
"These containers are rather expensive, but I can give you a couple of them in exchange for a little service."

http://i.imgur.com/5PiSip5.png

"And, by the way, you can bind your weapons to different mouse buttons, there's a special control for that in your inventory, right under weapon slots."
"And by the way, you can bind your weapons to different mouse buttons. There's a special control for that in your inventory right under the weapon slots."

http://i.imgur.com/U1fNkvV.png

"Next? Well, it's up to you! As they say, you can be whatever you wanna be, got it?"
"Next? Well, it's up to you! As they say, you can be whatever you wanna be. Got it?"

[Lurler]

Awesome. Thank you very much for your help!
All corrections are in!

This should be in the game with the next release.

[askew1]

I'm working my way through all the factions and have some more for Freedom. Also SPOILER ALERT!

More Selek Jeredan

http://i.imgur.com/P9SOUDn.png (http://i.imgur.com/P9SOUDn.png)

"I've tried to negotiate with Troyden, leader of The Order, but he is too stubborn, he still believes, that Xengatarn can be beaten by force."
"I've tried to negotiate with Troyden, leader of The Order, but he is too stubborn. He still believes that the Xengatarn can be beaten by force."

"Fanatics said they're waiting for Xengatarn to come and save them. I believe it means a 'no'."
"The Fanatics said they're waiting for the Xengatarn to come and save them. I believe that means 'no'."

http://i.imgur.com/XRepPqL.png (http://i.imgur.com/XRepPqL.png)

"I'm leaving station, gathering civilian and military fleet, and together we are moving to the ancient jumpgate."
"I'm leaving the station and gathering the civilian and military fleets so we can move together to the ancient jumpgate."

"I need some more time to gather all ships. Meet me in system Costan Theta, next to Irgrek jumpgate, I will need you assistance there!"
"However, I need some more time to gather all of the ships. Meet me in the Costan Theta system, next to the Irgrek jumpgate. I will need your assistance there!"

http://i.imgur.com/u7M4Yen.png (http://i.imgur.com/u7M4Yen.png)

"Yes, our civilian fleet in a nearby system is safe. For now. But we need to move them to the jumpgate, and such massive fleet inevitably is going to attract Xengatarn attention."
"Yes. Our civilian fleet is hiding in a nearby system and is safe... for now. But we need to move them to the jumpgate, and such a massive fleet inevitably is going to attract Xengatarn attention."

"And I don't have enough firepower to secure their passage to jumpgate."
"I don't have enough firepower to secure their passage to the jumpgate."

http://i.imgur.com/uuhECr5.png (http://i.imgur.com/uuhECr5.png)

"So be it. I'm giving order to civilian fleet to move towards jumpgate in small groups. Try to save as many of them, as you can."
"So be it. I'm ordering the civilian fleet to move towards the jumpgate in small groups. Try to save as many of them as you can."

http://i.imgur.com/JskE7x7.png (http://i.imgur.com/JskE7x7.png)

"It was the last of them. Now it's our turn. Say Far Colonies goodbye and let's leave this place forever. Are you ready?"
"That was the last group. Now it's our turn. Say goodbye to the Far Colonies and let's leave this place forever. Are you ready?"



"Exodus" Quest Log http://i.imgur.com/WXN8Bi6.png (http://i.imgur.com/WXN8Bi6.png)

"I should meet him there and see, if I can be of any use."
"I should meet him there and see if I can be of any use."

"Jeredan gave the order to civilian fleet to move through the ancient jumpgate."
"Jeredan gave the order to the civilian fleet to move through the ancient jumpgate."

"I've protected civilian ships, most of them reached jumpgate in one piece and jumped to safety. I should talk to Selek Jeredan now."
"I've protected the civilian ships. Most of them reached the jumpgate in one piece and jumped to safety. I should talk to Selek Jeredan now."



Freedom Ending http://i.imgur.com/mURslcY.png (http://i.imgur.com/mURslcY.png)

"While you wait as the last civilian ship passes through the jumpgate you recall all events that has happened in Far colonies in this short time of your involvement"
"While you wait as the last civilian ship passes through the jumpgate, you recall all the events that have happened in the Far Colonies in this short time of your involvement"

"A lot has changed in far colonies."
"A lot has changed in the Far Colonies."

"Many are still fighting, but your escape has given the Federation a new reason to establish a new connection with VoidExpanse to finally end this war once and for all and save millions of people still stranded on the other side."
"Many are still fighting, but your escape has given the Federation a reason to establish a new connection with VoidExpanse, to finally end this war once and for all, and save millions of people still stranded on the other side."

"Humanity has to face their enemy and finally put an end to what has transpired in Far colonies."
"Humanity has to face their enemy and finally put an end to what has transpired in the Far Colonies."

"But it is another story, written by different people."
"But that is another story, written by different people."

"And you... you have finally found some peace, here at the Federation core territories."
"And you... you have finally found some peace here in the Federation core territories."



"Ancient jumpgate" Quest Log http://i.imgur.com/Yj6JXmG.png

"I need to join engineer Presley and his small squad next to ancient jumpgate in system Costan Theta, and see that he can finish all required repairs."
"I need to join Engineer Presley and his small squad next to the ancient jumpgate in the Costan Theta system, and make sure that he can finish all required repairs."



Irgrek or Ergrek?

Something I've noticed is that the ancient alien race is spelled two different ways in many(!) parts of the game. Check this picture (http://i.imgur.com/ihuvyGw.png) to see in the conversation it's spelled "Irgrek" but in the buttons on the right side it is spelled "Ergreks".

I don't know which spelling is "right" as that is up to you guys. It should be a simple search all and replace to fix hopefully. I have more changes coming for the Fanatics though so I'd like to know which you are going with.

Xengatarnian?

Oh, there also in that picture it has "Xengatarnian?" which I don't think I've seen anywhere else. Usually I think it's just Xengatarn, i.e. "the Xengatarn artifact"

Artifact/Artefact

I've found both spellings in the game. Both are actually correct, but you should settle on using one consistently throughout the game.

I have more for the Fanatics on the way...

[Lurler]

Again, huge thanks askew1!
All corrections are in!

As for:
* Irgrek / Ergreks (the correct one is "E", btw.)
* Xengatarnian / Xengatarn
* Artifact / Artefact

That's what happens when there are many people working on the same thing
All has been fixed as well!

We have also added you to the "special thanks" section in the credits. I hope you don't mind

[ai_enabled]

VoidExpanse v1.1.0 including these fixes is available now (release notes) (http://forums.atomictorch.com/index.php?topic=481).